jouste's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Garage Fighting 2010]

this is wicked

such an awesome piece with such an awesome place for it to end up. very very cool johnny.

i think my favorite part is how well the composition is and then dan just ruins it by coming into the shot from the right, it really made me laugh that he was screwing up the shot so well.

and thank you for setting me straight on the whole NJ thing, it was really hurting my head trying to figure it out before you explained what the abbreviation was.

JohnnyUtah responds:

thanks dude. yeah thats what I was going for, hopefully I succeeded. :)

[jouste is a beauty]

hooray!

an excellent representation on the lazarus leigon!

when you asked to do this one specificlaly i was pretty excited because he wasn't a very big hit in some of my peer-circles. you made him look all stoic and mean. shadman was right in saying you made your version a lot more mean looking than mine, very cool direction.

now this is a review so i'll drop some crit:

your ideas are really good but you may need to loosen up your characters ridged and stiff posing if you want to get more energy out of them. i know here you're drawing a very stiff old man in a constrictive suite but i'm more mentioning this as a blanket statement on a lot of your art.

your colors are very very bold and they cut super deep on the page and you lose a lot of your line work and detail. this is great if that's the style you're going for but some line variation might be interesting to play around with.

enough of my blabbering, great job! lets do it again soon!

-jouste

dommi-fresh responds:

i agree about the poses actually i need to loosen the characters up. but the style that i use is suposed to be bold and unfortunatley yes it does mean i loose alot of the line work and detail but that is just a sacrafice i am willing to make.

thanks for the advice jouste i will keep in touch!

[THE Red Knight]

this rules

super stuff dude. the look is like pseudo historic, it really enriches the character. bad-ass pose as well. totally faved. stellar work brother.

dommi-fresh responds:

wow thanks you have really stuff as well great to hear from ya

[DANGEROUS JIM]

great job

this comic is short, sweet, and to the point. it's really got me interested in seeing more of dangerous jim and his extreme hunter's club.

with the constant barrage of environmentalism and being green, it's quite refreshing to see some maniac that kills sharks with a machete.

the expressions are great and the visible eraser lines and "hacky" approach to the colors gives it a mean charm and a good level of familiarity to the viewer.

the fistful of shark heart in the final panel is also totally awesome,

9 stars

dommi-fresh responds:

you totally get what i was going for!
thanks for writing